Woohoo…. Finally tried out a poem after so long… Hey peepz.. Just a random one i came out with… I guess i did fairly ok for a try; first time after so long!!! Oopss i know its some sort of very feeling a.k.a romantic one..Yeah yeah.. :P Its all tamil songs influence… ;) But not more than anything… Just sharing.. since some of them say it turned out nicely.. Yippidi!!!
My heart and soul is just for you
Sometimes i will wonder if its true..
I dropped myself into loneliness becos of you
I left everything just to be with you
Looking out the window
Seeing the moon
Talking and smiling
Thinking of you…
Seeing your name
Brightens my face
Brought me a smile
Which makes my day
It just gives me love, joy
happiness and hopes..
And its all becos of you….
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July 28th, 2009 at 1:59 AM
Wow Nice one naz..
oh this is the reason u wake up in the midnight n go to the balcony ?? lolz
July 28th, 2009 at 3:38 AM
Aneef,
Nope.. Its a childhood habit! and this is just a poem…. ;)
Nazreen
July 29th, 2009 at 3:31 AM
nice, was there anyone particular on your mind when you were composing this????
July 29th, 2009 at 4:13 AM
Disclaimer:The person who was inspiration to this poem is not me and the author/poet herself hold the whole responsibility.(yeppudiiiiiii)
super la!!!!
July 29th, 2009 at 4:42 AM
Sam,
Ahem Ahem! (Chuckle) Yeah! Someone was definitely on my mind when composing this.. It just happened randomly and I just tried.. It turned out well so i posted.. I think its fairly ok right?? Trying for the first time???
Surya & Aneef,
Thanks.. :)
Will try more… :)
August 1st, 2009 at 12:04 AM
its awsome girly…
keep on trying
good job